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（六）
初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充
满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end.
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【写作思路】
这是一篇提纲类0，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来
你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的
人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照
材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间
可以适当使用连接词。
【参考范文】
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high
school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve
learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made
some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my
schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious
that I quarreled with my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading
books.
Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful
life.
【名师点评】
这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I've also made some good friends.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
（七）
"你养我长大，我陪你变老。
"父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。
今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；
（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；
（3）拥有爱心，教我学会……；
（4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）。
注意事项：
（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of
my growth.
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【参考范文】
You bring me up．I will be with you in your life．You are important persons in the
process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（给我生命，一直照顾我成长）
When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help
me and encourage me．
【高分句型一】
In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，
you always work hard from morning till night．
（努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件）
Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．
【高分句型二】（拥有爱心，教我做慈爱的人）
Dad and mum，today I'll cook dinner for you．I'll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今
天要为父母做的两件事）
I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me
and encourage me．当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我．
when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事，
【高分句型二】
It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教会我做一个善良的人．
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